i really love the story so keep it up and dont change anything about the mc i love this mc bc hes not a pussy or a sissy like every vn mc i have play bc his backstory fit him as a character it made him cool asf and i want story before sex so it feel real and not boom sex rn kinda thing
the visuals are good. the story is okay. but the MC is a plank. there should be sexual tension between characters of an ero story. also, the MC never gets flustered, making him very unrelatable. he is either cool fighter guy or nice guy that cares. and while thats good and all, it lacks whats needed to push the narrative forward. you feel bored following him along because you cant relate (and c'mon, we are also here for some bed action). i hope you take note of this and improve your writing. wish you the best.
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hey i wanted to say your game is reaaaaalllllllllyyy good i love it
But i wanted to help (if this help and not angering you)
Will there be an update for the next version?
there will be soon
Is there a way to change the resolution, or are they fixed?
I'm sorry but Renpy highest resolution is 1920x1080 so it can't be higher
i really love the story so keep it up and dont change anything about the mc i love this mc bc hes not a pussy or a sissy like every vn mc i have play bc his backstory fit him as a character it made him cool asf and i want story before sex so it feel real and not boom sex rn kinda thing
thank friend, glad you enjoy my game so far
the visuals are good. the story is okay. but the MC is a plank. there should be sexual tension between characters of an ero story. also, the MC never gets flustered, making him very unrelatable. he is either cool fighter guy or nice guy that cares. and while thats good and all, it lacks whats needed to push the narrative forward. you feel bored following him along because you cant relate (and c'mon, we are also here for some bed action). i hope you take note of this and improve your writing. wish you the best.
thank you, I will take note of your opinion